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PostSubject: Shika's blade of mist   Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:59 am

Zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Name: The Mists Eye

Level: Shikai

Family: Water [Fog] Acid

Manifestation:

Spoiler:
 

Inner World:

Spoiler:
 

Sealed Zanpakuto:

Spoiler:
 

Shikai

Release Phrase: Bring on the mist

Shikai Appearance:

Spoiler:
 
Shikai Ability:

Sora's Shikai ability allows him to create a mist like fog with amazing acidic qaulity, This can be produced by powerful swings from the blade to create a wave of fog that sticks in the air OR he can produce these from his mouth allowing him to shoot out powerful gusts of acidic fog at a time. Not only that Sora shows the ability to alter the fog making it thin or thick aswell as manipulating the acidic qaulity allowing him to create a thin mist that burns his opponent rapidly. Breathing in this acidic fog is also deadly, The thin fog has low acidic levels thus would only caus a small pain. The thin acidic fog can caus the eyes to water making them blurry, A large weakness to his abilities is that fighting alongside companions means that Sora is most likely to caus them damage aswell. The fog can also be weakened by two elements

Wind - the thickness of the fog depends on how much wind is needed to blast it away

Water - Water can pierce the fog easily and reduce the acidic levels by "dampening" them


Acidic table

As soon as sora creates his fog he is able to alter the acidic level in that fog, These levels climb from one (being the lowest level) To 5 being the highest in the shikai level. These are activated for as long as the technique use is along with ONE extra post leaving a level one acidic qaulity in the air, Sora IS capable of manipulating these at will. Each attack starts of at there highest acidic qaulity (the ones provided in the ability description) Sora is capable of manipulating these at will but may only go lower (this can be done by going down one level instantly - eg- 5 to 4 instantly) Any others takes one post

Shikai level
1 capable of burning eyes
2 Capable of drying up the throat and the above
3 Capable of burning rocks and the above
4 Capable of melting metal and causes pain when inhaled and the above
5 Capable of severly burning someone causing a large amount of pain thus making movements very painful and all of the above

Bankai level use only
6
7
8
9
10


Bankai

Bankai Name:

Bankai Release Phrase:

Bankai Appearance:

Bankai Ability:


Techniques:

Name: Skilled fog
Level: Shikai
Types: Mist Boil, Fog
Effect: Shika is able to spew out a large amount of acidic fog with an acidic reading of 4 which is capable of melting through the toughest of metals (except Zan's) The fog is extremely quick moving when expelled and can easily cover a closed of area, A dangerous move to use when fighting with comrades as comrades are likely to be affected with this technique, Like all of Shika's abilities the fog's acid does not seem to work on him, The fog that is released is also capable of severly burning the throats and nazel passages if inhaled,
Range: Short to mid
Duration/Post Usage: 4 posts
Preparation Posts: N/A
Cool Down: 2 posts
Acid level 4

Name: Fog Shot
Level: Shikai
Types: Fog,Mist, Boil
Effect:

Sora can release a powerful ball of fog which is shot from his mouth, This ball is condensed and has a acidic reading of three capable of burning rocks. An extremely powerful attack yet easily dodged if there is enough time. Alternitavly Sora can swing his blade and release a wave of fog that has a wider reach to it tho the acidic qaulity is considerably weaker, the acidic qaulity is one thus burning the skin slightly and burns the eyes

Range: Short - mid - long
Duration/Post Usage: one post
Preparation Posts: N/A
Cool Down: N/A
Acid level 3 when expelled by mouth and 1 when expelled by sword

Name: Fog of heaven
Level: Shikai
Types: fog
Effect:

Shika's ultamate Shikai technique. Using this in an open area severaly weakens the technique, Using it in a closed of space this technqiue is extremely powerful. Sora releases a powerful blast of fog from his mouth with a high acidic qaulity, As a shikai this ability is not strong enough to kill but is strong enough to caus severe pain to ones body thus limiting movements, Reactions and speed. The attack causes 3rd degree burns.



Range: Short -Medium - Long
Duration/Post Usage: 4posts
Preparation Posts: 4 posts
Cool Down: 20 posts

Acid level 5


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PostSubject: Re: Shika's blade of mist   Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:05 am

Alrighy, i will list the problems I have and so on by number... So, lets get started....

1. All pictures need to be put in spoilers....

2. You need to work on your Comma and Period usage....

3. I will get to the rest once I can read the App. better.
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PostSubject: Re: Shika's blade of mist   Sat Nov 27, 2010 12:36 pm

Sora wrote:
Family: (Mist Boil fog)

Alrighty, Change this to Water[Fog]/Acid, please. Since, you are basically using a form of Water, fog, and turning it into a base acidic liquid.

Sora wrote:
Shikai Ability:

Sora's Shikai ability allows him to create a mist like fog with amazing acidic qaulity, This can be produced by powerful swings from the blade to create a wave of fog that sticks in the air OR he can produce these from his mouth allowing him to shoot out powerful gusts of acidic fog at a time, Not only that Sora shows the ability to alter the fog making it thin or thick aswell as manipulating the acidic qaulity allowing him to create a thin mist that burns his opponent rapidly, Breathing in this acidic fog is also deadly, The thin fog has low acidic levels thus would only caus a small pain, The thin acidic fog can caus the eyes to water making them blurry, A large weakness to his abilities is that fighting alongside companions means that Sora is most likely to caus them damage aswell, The fog can also be weakened by two elements

Wind - the thickness of the fog depends on how much wind is needed to blast it away

Water - Water can pierce the fog easily and reduce the acidic levels by "dampening" them


Acidic table

The acidic levels activate as soon as the abilities do, They also disperse ONE POST after the actual mist leaving some acidic qaulity in the air (all acidic qaulity left is level one)

Shikai level
1 capable of burning eyes
2 Capable of drying up the throat and the above
3 Capable of burning small rocks and the above
4 Capable of melting metal and causes pain when inhaled and the above
5 Capable of severly burning someone causing a large amount of pain thus making movements very painful and all of the above


Everything needs to either be changed or edited. The Shikai ability still needs to have PERIODS instead of commas everywhere. Then, the Levels need ot be explained more. There is a difference between Burning and melting. Also, you won't be able to melt other Zanpakutos. That will not be allowed at all.

Verdict: Pending
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PostSubject: Re: Shika's blade of mist   Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:02 pm

Sora wrote:
Name: Skilled fog
Level: Shikai
Types: Mist Boil, Fog
Effect:Shika Terumī, creates a cloud of fog which he releases from his mouth. This fog has corrosive properties, capable of even melting hardest of metals. The technique has an inherent disadvantage in that its effects are indiscriminate, limiting its usage to areas that do not presently contain allies until the attack is completed. In the event that the fog escapes the containment area, thus putting others in danger, Sora has shown the ability to alter the acidic levels in the fog as to not caus as much damage to allies.

Though the fog is corrosive to all around it, the user seems to be immune to it, as sora has shown,

Range: Short to mid
Duration/Post Usage: 4 posts
Preparation Posts: N/A
Cool Down: 2 posts
Acid level 4

Name: Fog Shot
Level: Shikai
Types: Fog,Mist, Boil
Effect:

Sora can release a powerful ball of fog which is shot from his mouth, This ball is condensed and has a huge acidic reading thus anything it comes in contact melts. An extremely powerful attack yet easily dodged if there is enough time. Alternitavly Sora can swing his blade and release a wave of fog that has a wider reach to it tho the acidic qaulity is considerably weaker

Range: Short - mid - long
Duration/Post Usage: one post
Preparation Posts: N/A
Cool Down: N/A
Acid level 3 when expelled by mouth and 1 when expelled by sword

Name: Fog of heaven
Level: Shikai
Types: fog
Effect:

Sora's ultamate Shikai technique. Using this in an open area severaly weakens the technique, Using it in a closed of space this technqiue is extremely powerful. Sora releases a powerful blast of fog from his mouth with a high acidic qaulity capable of peeling flesh from bones in a matter of posts, As a shikai this ability is not strong enough to kill but is strong enough to caus severe pain to ones body thus limiting movements, Reactions and speed. The attack causes 3rd degree burns.



Range: Short -Medium - Long
Duration/Post Usage: 4posts
Preparation Posts: 4 posts
Cool Down: 20 posts

Acid level 5


Alrighty, First technique..... It is a basically a copy and pasted verison of Skilled Mist Technique... Rewrite it in your own words....

Second Technique...... Take out the underlined part. Then, Repplace it with something within the limits of that level...

Third Technique..... Rewrite or Edit the underlined part. It doesn't state you can peel away flesh from bones in the level limiter.....

Verdict is the same as before....
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PostSubject: Re: Shika's blade of mist   Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:24 am

Verdict: APPROVED!

P.S: If another Staffer finds anything wrong witht his App. theyhave the right to post and unapprove it until problem is fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Shika's blade of mist   Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:49 am

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Alrighty, I have seena few problems that were adressed.

1. The number of psots it will take you to decrease your Acidic levels, which you stated that it is one post for one level.

2. He cannot create ANY fog other then his Techniques, which all have there Acidic Levels posted up.

3. I here-by Re-approve this..... The same P.S. remains as before...
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