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Shinji



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PostSubject: Confuse, Katawa    Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:07 am

Zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Name: Katawa

Level: Bankai

Family: Illusion

Manifestation: Katawa appears to be a 40 year old man with a grey beard and red hair. He wears a blue spandex suit with red boots, and a red spandex brief over his pants. He has a K on the middle of his chest and is at the height of 6 foot 2 with average weight.

Inner World: His inner world appears to be a world with red skies and red clouds. They appear to be standing on air as the bottom of the world cannot be seen. Instead, a multitude of predators lurk around the place passing by the Katawa and Shinji. When in chaos, instead of fierce predators, they turn into plant eating extinct dinosaurs. And the world is filled with rainbows and a voice singing ABC.

Sealed Zanpakuto: Katawa appears to be a sharp thin blade with a golden hilt wrapped with a white bandage. The cross guard appears to be just a mere X as its scabbard seems to be a black sheath stripped with gold.

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Release Phrase: Confuse, Katawa.

Shikai Appearance: Katawa stays relatively the same, but there are add ones. On the bottom of the hilt, there will be a rope connecting to a small scythe which can be attached and detached at will. The red rope seems to be nine inches long when it is still attached to the bottom of the hilt, but if it is detached, a longer rope comes out and it reaches the length of 2 feet. However, in it's first appearance, it just appears to be a five inch knife attached to the bottom of the hilt, but if Shinji pushes a button on the cross guard, it will drop and appear to be attached to a rope 9 inches long. Then with another button on the cross guard, it will drop completely and will become a kurasigama.

Shikai Ability: Katawa's ability is a illusory or one could say an optical one. It also messes up the opponent(s) hearing. It also has two different stages. The first stage makes a sound from a Tv which connection to cable is disturbed. Like a wrapper being spread or when someone is talking with someone in the phone and goes through a tunnel. The optical illusion comes into place and it seems like the user is going up and down, up and down, like in a Tv plugged into a DVD player, but a wire is lose. So, it seems like the user is constantly attacking. One slash would seem like he is slashing down 5 times or so and it makes it very difficult to know which is which. After two posts of this, the user will seem to have had a clone beside him and will cause the enemy to misjudge where is the real one.

The second stage ability of Katawa is that it gives the enemy extraordinary sight. Being able to see things in all directions, however, the enemy is simply seeing the same spot but in different places. His eyes seem to be like monitors of the same thing and if Shinji aims to stab him in the front, it will seem like he is stabbing in all directions. The only weakness to this that even his teammate's are affected by this. Also, if another ability of equal illusory power is activated, it will disable the second stage.

The opponent is affected by this in two different ways. The first way applies only to the first stage. The opponent must feel Shinji's reiatsu which would be close to unavoidable even if one were dense in sensing reiatsu. The second way which applies to only the second stage ability is by seeing the blade, Katawa, but if it cannot be seen, then it cannot work.

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PostSubject: Re: Confuse, Katawa    Fri Dec 03, 2010 10:46 am

I want to know how exactly does your shikai even affect your oponent? is it the release reiatsu or is it caused by some other means.
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PostSubject: Re: Confuse, Katawa    Fri Dec 03, 2010 10:58 am

Added it. It's the third paragraph.
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PostSubject: Re: Confuse, Katawa    Wed Dec 08, 2010 2:09 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Confuse, Katawa    Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:23 am

1. I don't like it.

2. Denied.

3. The first part of your ability could easily become OP. And I will try to point out why. After reading it, your opponent only needing to feel your Reiatsu is a no no. Find another reasonable way to activate the ability or scrap it.

4. The same for the visible and invisible sword deal. Scrap it or find another way to trap your opponents.

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